New Chapter – Chapter 4 – Captain Brunei and Balau Man

It’s a new chapter to my Brunei Superhero Story.

This time the characters finally suit up as superheroes thus ending Volume I (or the Origin stories).

As mentioned previously, I’m re-editing and re-publishing the story online one chapter per week. But I realized that it wasn’t realistic and I needed more time because I wasn’t just re-editing them but I had to re-arrange or add new plot elements or I simply just need to pause and figure out how to lay the seeds for future plot lines. And also because of my day job as well LOL

So now I have decided to try to publish one chapter every two weeks.

Hope you’ve enjoyed them so far!

Guardians Of Darussalam

The Brunei Superhero story continues…

Chapter 4 – Ali

As a new type of drugs begin to seep into the black market, Adam and Ridzuan makes their debut as costumed heroes.

This new chapter also marks the end of Volume I of the story which is the basically the Origin story of the main characters.

You can read the latest Chapter HERE.

I’m open to any comments or suggestions.

When you’re done reading, you can head off to the commentary below.

CHAPTER 4 COMMENTARY

OK, first things first, we FINALLY get to the point where these characters suit up and adopt their superhero moniker. You have:

  1. Adam as Captain Brunei, obviously inspired by Marvel’s Captain America.
  2. Ridzuan as Balau Man, the ‘Batman’ of the story.
  3. Liza takes her social media username, Dayang Dynamite and starting to turn it into a brand. Although she has yet to don a superhero costume…

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